Sample 5: Grade
9
Topic:
Electronic Correspondence
1.
Prescribed Learning Outcomes:
Communicating
It is expected
that students will:
- ask for assistance and
detailed information
- share opinions and preferences,
giving reasons
- describe and exchange
information related to activities, people, places, and things
- arrange events in past,
present, and future
- participate in selected
meaningful, real-life situations
Aquiring
Information
It is expected that students will:
- extract, retrieve, and
process information from French-language resources to complete authentic tasks
- explain acquired information
in oral, visual, and written forms
Experiencing Creative
Works
It is expected that students will:
- reflect on and respond
to authentic creative works from the Francophone world
Understanding Cultural
Influences
It is expected that students will:
- identify and compare
Francophone cultures from around the world
- distinguish similarities
and differences between their own customs and those of Francophone cultures
- identify language, expressions,
and behaviours that suit cultural context
2.
Overview
The teacher developed a
series of web-based activities to initiate correspondence with students in a
Francophone culture. The teacher considered a variety of ways to do this, for
example, by students corresponding with individual students in another class,
by the class as a whole creating messages for another class, or by having students
participate in a student listserv or chat group. The introductory activities
occurred continuously over two weeks of classes, while the correspondence process
continued for the remainder of the school year.
Although this sample deals
with electronic correspondence, it can be easily adapted to a penpal situation.
Evaluation was based on:
- participation in oral
preparation activities
- information collection
from the Internet
- visual projects developed
on local activities, people, places, and things
- actual correspondence
students sent to their "keypals"
- oral presentations of
the information they received
- visual projects developed
on differences and similarities between their own customs and those of Francophone
cultures
3. Planning
for Assessment and Evaluation
- Students worked in pairs
to do the cooperative activity "think-pair-share" (see
diagram) on the purposes and possible methods of correspondence. During
the whole class sharing that followed this activity, the teacher prompted
discussion with questions such as:
- How many of you correspond
regularly in writing with others?
- How many of you have
correspondents outside of this region?
- What format options
are available (e.g., mail, fax, e-mail)?
- What formats do you
most enjoy sending? Receiving?
- Students returned to
their partners to create web charts/mind maps on poster paper that showed
the benefits of having penpals/keypals. These were posted around the room
for the duration of the unit to remind students of the purpose of this unit.
- The teacher explained
that students would be selecting and corresponding with students from Francophone
cultures around the world using the Internet. Students brainstormed how to
find keypals on the Internet (e.g., keypal exchange, using a search engine
to find keypal sites).
- The teacher provided
students with (or, subject to time and interest, had the students do a web
search for) the three types of keypal exchanges. The class chose the individual
student-to-individual student format.
- The teacher read a sample
letter. In pairs, students brainstormed features that make correspondence
worthwhile and interesting. They collated ideas on a flipchart for classroom
display. The teacher helped students follow up by suggesting simple ways to
ensure quality in their correspondence in French, such as:
- learning as much
as you can about where your keypal lives
- practising vocabulary
and a variety of sentence frames for telling about yourself and asking
questions about someone else
- learning how to describe
in French the place where you live
- experimenting with
ways of making your information interesting
- To help students become
aware of the variety of Francophone cultures, the teacher played Francophone
songs from various regions around the world. The teacher asked students where
the performers might be from, leading the discussion with questions such as:
- What clues might
help you guess where someone is from?
- What are some of
the similarities and differences between this and the music you listen
to?
- What other areas
in the world are French-speaking?
- Students coloured the
areas of the world considered to be Francophone on a photocopied world map.
- The teacher divided the
class into groups and assigned each group a major area of the Francophone
world, such as Québec, Acadie, France, Afrique du Nord, or Louisiane.
They were also given information sheets to complete.
- Using the Internet, students
researched the assigned Francophone cultures to complete their information
sheets. Each group presented their findings to the class with any visual support
they were able to print off the Internet. The completed information sheets
and visuals were posted on a central bulletin board on a large map of the
Francophone world.
- Students read sample
French penpal/keypal letters and generated a list of useful vocabulary and
language structures. They worked in pairs to fill in the blanks in letters
where words and phrases had been omitted (cloze activities). Multiple samples
and alternate phrasings helped students develop variety in their correspondence.
Information
Sheet
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Chez
nous
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Au
(Maroc)
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Le climat
La population
Un paysage typique
Les passe-temps
favoris
La nourriture typique
La musique typique
Les sports populaires
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- Each student created
a letter of introduction to a keypal that was first sent to the teacher's
e-mail address. The letter contained elements from the information chart done
as part of the web search in a previous class. The teacher forwarded students'
letters to the appropriate teacher, school, or student listserv.
- During the rest of that
term/semester, students were given the opportunity to check their e-mail regularly
and to respond to any messages received. The teacher tracked the correspondence
by providing a correspondence log to be completed by students.
- At the end of the term/semester,
students introduced their keypals to the class with multimedia presentations
that included all of the information they had learned about their keypals'
cultures as well as personal descriptions of the students. Each presentation
had an oral introduction, a music background, pictures and objects from the
keypal's country, photos of the keypal, and samples of his or her favourite
foods. A few students chose to do PowerPoint presentations.
Correspondence
Log
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Date
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From/To
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Sent/Rec'd
(S/R)
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General
Message Idea (S)
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General
Message Idea
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4.
Defining the Criteria
The teacher reviewed the
learning outcomes for these activities, then explained the requirements of each
task to the students. The teacher and students decided the following key criteria
should be demonstrated in the assigned tasks.
Accessing Information
on the Internet
To what extent does the student:
- access a variety of electronic
sources (such as French search engines and web sites)
- download appropriate
data from the Internet
Participation in Oral
Activities
To what extent does the student:
- interact with the information
through questions, responses, and following instructions
- use French to ask and
respond to questions from the teacher and other students
- speak French during class
and group activities
- respond to and support
others in their use of French
Web Chart/Mind Map
on the Benefits of Having a Keypal
To what extent does the student:
- provide all required
information
- include relevant and
interesting details
- use appropriate vocabulary,
spelled correctly
- show appropriate organization
of information
Information Sheet
To what extent does the student:
- provide all required
information
- include relevant and
interesting details
- use appropriate vocabulary,
spelled correctly
- show appropriate organization
of information
- reproduce French words
and patterns in understandable form
Oral Presentation
of the Information Sheet
To what extent does the student:
- present information
clearly
- include relevant or interesting
details or features
- speak smoothly-most pauses
occur at the end of phrases or sentences
- use a variety of vocabulary
and language structures appropriate to the subject
E-mail Letters to
Keypal
To what extent does the student:
- present clear, relevant,
and appropriate information
- include interesting details
or features
- ask questions about or
make comparisons with local community
- include information about
personal tastes, a description of the school, and community customs
- ask questions about comparable
customs or behaviour patterns
- use a variety of vocabulary
and language structures
- use spelling and mechanics
that do not interfere with meaning
Multimedia Presentation
on the Keypal
To what extent does the student:
- convey an understandable
message
- include all required
information
- provide relevant and
unusual details to add interest
- sustain the use of French-pauses
do not impede communication
- pronounce most words
accurately or approximately
- self-correct as needed
- use appropriate vocabulary
and language patterns correctly
- include several types
of media: music, visual, electronic
5.
Assessing and Evaluating Student Performance
The teacher used performance
rating scales to evaluate students' work on this unit. Students were given copies
of the rating scales, and discussed them in English before working on their
assignments. Teachers and students used the scales to assess and provide feedback
on the posters, information sheets, information presentations, and e-mail letters.
These scales were adapted and used throughout the year to assess visual, oral,
and written work.
Accessing
Information on the Internet
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Criteria
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Rarely
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Sometimes
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Always
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- accesses a variety
of electronic sources (such as French search engines and web sites
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- downloads appopriate
data from the Interne
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Participation
in Oral Activities
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Date
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Criteria
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Rating
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- interacts with
the information through questions, responses, and following instructions
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- uses French to
ask and respond to questions from the teacher and other students
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- speaks French during
class and group activities
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- responds to and
supports others when they are speaking French
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Key:
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3 - Independently/minimal
support
2 - With some support
1 - With continuing support
0 - Not demonstrated |
Web
Chart/Mind Map on the Benefits of Having a Keypal
|
Criteria
|
Rating
|
- provides complete
information
|
|
- includes relevant
and interesting details
|
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- uses appropriate
vocabulary, spelled correctly
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- shows appropriate
organization of information
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Key:
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3 - Strong
2 - Satisfactory
1 - Needs improvement
0 - Not demonstrated |
Student
Mobiles
|
Criteria
|
Rating
|
- provides all required
information
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- includes relevant
and interesting details
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- uses appropriate
vocabulary, spelled correctly
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- shows appropriate
organization of information
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- reproduces French
words and patterns in understandable form
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Key:
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3 - Strong
2 - Satisfactory
1 - Needs improvement
0 - Not demonstrated |
Oral Presentation
of the Information Sheet
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Rating
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Comments
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Self
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Peer
|
Teacher
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- presents information
clearly
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- includes relevant
or interesting detials or features
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- speaks smoothly
- most pauses occur at the end of phrases or sentences
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- uses a variety
of vocabulary and language structures appropriate to the subject
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Overall
Rating for
Oral Presentation
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Key:
|
3 - Independently/minimal
support
2 - With some support
1 - With continuing support
0 - Not demonstrated |
E-mail Letters to Keypal
Note: Communication
of meaning is the most important consideration and should receive the greatest
weighting in assigning a grade.
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Rating
|
Criteria
|
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Outstanding
5
|
Goes beyond
the requirements of the task to demonstrate extended learning or new applications.
Offers clear, relevant, and appropriate information. Includes interesting
details or features. Asks questions about or makes comparisons with local
community. Includes information about personal tastes, school, and community
customs. Asks questions about comparable customs or behaviour patterns.
Uses a variety of vocabulary and language structures. Spelling and mechanics
do not interfere with meaning.
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Good
4
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Information is clear,
relevant, accurate, and offers some details. Asks questions and makes
some comparisons with local community. Includes some information about
personal tastes, school, and community customs. Asks questions about
keypal's customs. Uses a range of useful vocabulary and structures,
with some repetition. May include some structural errors, but these
do not obscure meaning.
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Satisfactory
3
|
Writing is comprehensible
but may be unclear in places, often because of problems with organization.
Links between ideas may be weak or confusing. Includes general information
about school and everyday life and asks some questions. Vocabulary tends
to be basic and concrete. May include errors in word choice, structures,
or surface features, but these do not seriously obscure meaning.
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Minimally
Acceptable
2
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Attempts to ask
questions and provide general information. Supporting details may be
confusing, irrelevant, or inappropriate. Vocabulary and patterns tend
to be basic and repetitive. Writing may be incomprehensible in places
because of errors in word choice, word order, or sentence structure.
May be very brief. The writing tends to be repetitive and lacks a sense
of general organization.
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Not
Yet Acceptable
1
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Information is unclear,
incomplete, or inappropriate. May be very short. A large number of errors
may make it impossible for the reader to understand the writer's views.
|
Oral
and Multimedia Presentation
Note: Communication
of meaning is the most important consideration and should receive the greatest
weighting in assigning a grade.
|
Rating
|
Criteria
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Outstanding
5
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Goes beyond
the requirements of the task to demonstrate extended learning or new applications.
Takes risks with language, sometimes making errors when attempting to
express complexities or subtleties. Information is clear, relevant, accurate,
and logically organized. The presentation has oral, visual, and musical
components that contribute to a full understanding of the keypal. A wide
range of visual aids and oral explanations enriches the presentation.
Errors in language use do not detract from meaning.
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Strong
5
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Information
is clear, relevant, accurate, and detailed. The presentation has oral,
visual, and musical components, with visual aids and oral explanations
that enrich the presentation. May include some repetition and structural
errors, but these do not obscure meaning.
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Competent
4
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Information is clear,
relevant, and accurate. Some detail is presented to support views, but
links between ideas may be weak in places. The presentation has basic
oral, visual, and musical components. Language and visual components
tend to be basic and concrete. May include errors in tense or structure,
but meaning is clear.
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Developing
3
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Information is relevant
and accurate, but may be unclear in places. Some detail is presented
to support views, but links between ideas may be weak or confusing.
Presentation has few visual, oral, and musical components, which do
not necessarily enrich the understanding of the keypal. Vocabulary and
structures tend to be basic and repetitive. May include errors in tense,
structure, and occasionally, spelling (indicating that the student did
not use a dictionary or other resources to check his or her work), but
these do not seriously affect meaning.
|
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Underdeveloped
2
|
Attempts to address
the topic. Some accurate information is presented, but some of the supporting
detail may be confusing, irrelevant, or inappropriate. Vocabulary tends
to be basic and repetitive with little appropriate use of French idiom.
Errors in tense, structure, and spelling may make it difficult for the
audience to understand the meaning in places. The presentation tends
to be choppy, repetitive, and lacks a sense of logical organization.
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Requirement
Not Met
1
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Information or message
is unclear, incomplete, or inappropriate. May be very short. A large
number of errors may make it impossible for the audience to understand
the presenter's view.
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